Dialogue

   Lauren was so excited for her 7th annual Halloween party. It was all going as planned; the decorations, food, and music were all set. She was getting dressed when she got a rather strange text from a person she had not spoken to since elementary school. The text read, "So excited for tonight, tell Joe I said thanks for the invite! - xoxo S"
   "I can't believe you invited her," said Lauren.
   "You never said I couldn't ," replied Joe.
   "Well I didn't think you would be that stupid. You know what she did to me last fall"
   "That was forever ago. Are you really still mad about what happened?"
   "Of course I'm still mad. I'm telling you it was not an accident I know it was her."
    Lauren Walker was the most popular girl in school, but everyone knew that Lauren and Sarah Roper were not friends. In fact they had been mortal enemies ever since the first grade, when Lauren humiliated Sarah in front of the whole grade. Nobody suspected that sweet Sarah was still angry that Lauren had accused her of stealing her boyfriend. Sarah was not the type of person to hold a grudge. Or was she?
                                                           *1 year ago*
   "Oh she will pay for what she's done. After tonight I'll finally get my revenge"
                                                    *1 year and 3 hours ago*
   "I just know this is going to be the best party yet!" laughed Lauren. All of her friends were gathered in her room putting on their costumes. "What was that!?" she yelled.
   "Oh relax, it was probably just a shadow from the trees," said her best friend Jessica, trying to comfort her. Lauren relaxed, but what she did not see was a shadow creeping around her house.
                                                    *1 year and 6 hours ago*
   Lauren was relieved,  her ex-friend Sarah had not shown up to her party. Lauren did not want that weirdo to ruin a fabulous night. She walked outside to take a break from her busy job as hostess, when an all to familiar voice spoke.
  "Hello there Lauren," said a girl's voice. The last thing Lauren saw was blackness before she woke up with an awful headache and found herself locked in an unknown place.

Comments

  1. julianaSeptember 21, 2017 at 3:16 PM

    Your dialogue flows really well and has lots of well-developed ideas. I really like how you went from the present to the past!

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